Some people think law changes human behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?
These days there is an ongoing debate between people about law changes human behavior. While it is possible to claim that rules and regulations needs to be followed by every one for peace and growth of the country, my view is that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In this essay I shall explain my point of view by analyzing both sides of arguments.
There several reasons why I am agreeing that law changes human behavior and it has advantages. One of them is that strict rules and regulations leads to safety environment. It can also be argued with that following rules directly impact on country growth. It should also be taken into the account that following rules traffic rules avoids more accidents.
Those who argue and disagree that law do not change human behavior have different view and say that it can be actually a good thing. Firstly, it is claimed that people may feel stress because of strict rules and regulations. Then there are concerns about following rules on emergency conditions is too risky.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that law should be maintained even it changes human behavior. I would strongly recommend that law can change human behavior for country growth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...guments. There several reasons why I am agreeing that law changes human behavior and it ...
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Line 7, column 64, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...arguments on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that law should be maintained even i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, may, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 31.9359605911 63% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94366197183 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54011870709 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56338028169 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0308011486 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.75 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207206004479 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838248341873 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955740514062 0.071462118173 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135596889029 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408543405987 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 55.0591133005 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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