Some people think law changes human behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?
It is irrefutable that laws and protocols have significant effect on human behaviour, but whether it is a positive phenomenon or negative is still a controversial issue around the world. So, it is little difficult to comment on it. Many people ponder that it has benefitted masses in plethora of ways, and I sternly agree with this statement.
There are a plethora of arguments which I would consider to substantiate my view. The most preponderant one stems from the fact that an array of laws and rules regulate human behaviour from their birth to death that guide them to work for the betterment of the society. Laws not only teach discipline to children, but they also show them a pathway to become a successful person without harming the community. Needless to say, all these merits of imposing laws stand people in good stead, as far as peaceful society is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of making regulations to control human behaviour is that it restrict harmful activities as terrorism and crime. People feel fear to harm anyone due to punishments imposed by law. Hence, it is evident why many stand in favour of this notion.
In view of the arguments outlined above one can conclude that laws has undeniable effect on human being to act for the progress of the world. Its potential benefits are indeed too great to ignore.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider substantiating'.
Suggestion: consider substantiating
...e a plethora of arguments which I would consider to substantiate my view. The most preponderant one stem...
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Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun stand seems to be countable; consider using: 'many stands'.
Suggestion: many stands
...posed by law. Hence, it is evident why many stand in favour of this notion. In view of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87336244541 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68398077282 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64192139738 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2377997183 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 7.25397266985 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205319104265 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613309838229 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475028419074 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117482754353 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310839564066 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 61.0 Out of 90
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