Some people think placing advertisements in schools is a great resource for public schools that need additionally funding, but others think it exploits children by treating them as a captive audience for corporate sponsors.
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
It is irrefutable to say that, these days schools are advertising commercials in their schools in different ways to increase their income. some people believe that private adertisement can help school to generate more revenue while others opine that it has negative impact on students and they will feel themselves as captive audience. I am inclined towards not supporting advertisement in schools. this essay will succinctly describes the impact of advertisement in schools.
Firstly, schools should be not part of any private campign such as advertisement, political sessions or publicity shows. Because this has direct impact on the students and they will feel themselves as a part of environment where their education system is sold to earn some extra money. For example, If a school is allowing a company to display their product in the school in exchange of some comission then it will be a very bad ethical behavior of the institue. education institues should never allow any adertisement inside the schools directly or indirectly.
On the other hand, private schools are earning a lot of money by allowing corporate sectors to sell their products to students. they funds, schools are getting, are not used for the betterment of the students but those are just extra source of income for the school management. For example, many poor students can not afford school fees and management will not give them any subsidy despite of have extra funds earned from sponsors. this will lead a negative impact on the life of the students.
To recapitulate, the foregoing discussion propounds that all the school should be banned from doing any kind of advertisement as it results in bad impressionon students. In my opinion adertisement in school is not a good idea.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, then, while, for example, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1107266436 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85379665746 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539792387543 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2992881865 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222220913653 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800498444537 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490744324372 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140519628795 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379534859779 0.0609392437508 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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