Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress, and how can we reduce it?
Recently, a phenomenon of stress and its corresponding impact in different countries has sparked an ongoing debate which inevitably leads to a moot question, where does the tension come from? where many believe that the mobile, social media and money are some of the major factors; However many believe exercise and other healthy sport can help reduce such issues. In this essay both the arguments will be discussed and will lead to a plausible conclusion. From the social standpoint, mobile phones, TV’s, social media , money has offer noticeable effect in the society which are rooted in the fact that living style and communication inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when i was a university student, i performed an experiment which discovered that seventy percent of mental health issues are related to modern system and technology. Thus, beneficial ramification of this phenomenon can be seen. Within the realm of Community, Job security, cheap housing, cheaper electricity and other utility bills can be a start to reduce pressure. Moreover, there should be noise reduction schemes and healthy life style seminars to help people overcome tensions. As a tangible example, a research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that fifty percent of people are stress because of not having a good job. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of good employment can help reduce problem.
To end, there are several compelling arguments on both side, I profoundly believe that stress can removed by society by working along people issue. It not only creating a broader spectrum but also making life easier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4367816092 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44005793577 2.71678728327 127% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632183908046 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.0724709 50.4703680194 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.666666667 104.977214359 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.9669160288 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.12807881773 48% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196707293513 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713645000798 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482417365028 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138985712496 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411847015848 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 12.6369458128 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.94827586207 186% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.5123152709 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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