Students with degrees earn high salary than who doesn’t have an academic qualification. Therefore, some argue that they have to pay the full cost of their courses. Give your opinion.
There has been a significant surge in education fees all round the world. Some people believe that this is because graduates earn high salary as compared to others who do not graduate and therefore should pay the entire fees for their education. This essay will discuss how this notion is incorrect and earning money is not dependent on degree.
To begin with, getting a job is mostly reference based thesedays. People who have good references in good companies are most likely to end up getting a good job despite having low earned degree in terms of cost or quality. For example, in my current company, some employees who are close to our operations manager are getting good salaries despite having no engineering degree. Therefore, earning higher salary has no relation with degrees.
Secondly, getting a highly paid job depends on the skills of person. In this time, companies prefer to hire people who have certain skills as per their requirement irrespective of their academic qualifications. For instance, a person might have excellent computer skills such as programming, even without any degree and will be preferred in the market over the person who has qualification but average skills. Thus, degrees does not land a person in high earning job.
To conclude, mostly people get jobs based on references while some employees seek skillful individuals. In my opinion having a degree only is not essential for highly paid jobs therefore educational fees should be reduced.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12757201646 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68934370449 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59670781893 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5032348158 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8461538462 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.25397266985 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257805853278 0.242375264174 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916484353274 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576161630176 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149102031988 0.151781067708 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380349271934 0.0609392437508 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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