Talk about the pros/cons of this era as is full of daily inventions.
From the inception of an era, human is keep trying to search, develop and enhance all kind of ways to live life comfortable and luxurious. However, as we know every invention is having their pros and cons and I will ponder upon both of the concern.
There are myriads of example that why invention is so useful for humanity. Scientists are keep inventing new things so that human can do multiple anything at a single point of time. For an instance, if we can considerate 70th century, when travelling was considerably difficult that not everyone can afford their own transportation. There were not significant options available, to reach from one place to another. But, thanks to science who developed new technologies and provided multiple numbers of ways like car, bus, bike, cycle etcetera. As a result, due to these inventions, mostly everyone is capable to buy their own vehicle around the world as per their pocket.
In contrast, its moot topic as well that invention is curse to human existence also. On the basis of security from one country to another, human already have created million of weapons. Consequently, these weapons is immensely dangerous for all human beings. We have already seen in last world war that how America bombard on Japan and destroyed their cities. Thousands of people were killed due to conflicts between both countries. There are plenty of conflicts are still going on with in world for different countries and for different things which can affect not only humanity but also nature. Moreover, we can say that 'what man has made of man'. Man would be self responsible to hurt their own entity.
In conclusion, we can say that regardless to invention to mankind, inventors must consider that their invention should not affect nature in any manner. Ultimately, nature and human is a vital part of each one. No one can live without other.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...t invention is curse to human existence also. On the basis of security from one coun...
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Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
... to another, human already have created million of weapons. Consequently, these weapons...
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Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (America) must be used with a third-person verb: 'bombards'.
Suggestion: bombards
...seen in last world war that how America bombard on Japan and destroyed their cities. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 317.0 242.827586207 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92744479495 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63866879656 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 139.433497537 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608832807571 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0189739476 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2105263158 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6842105263 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94736842105 7.25397266985 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0334709596955 0.242375264174 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00965086409217 0.0925447433944 10% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247183226125 0.071462118173 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0295953280798 0.151781067708 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423059166659 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 12.6369458128 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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