Team sports are generally promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behaviour. If sporting events cause antisocial behaviour, can team sports really be good for us?
Thesedays, team sports are very popular among people of all ages as compare to individual sports. some believe that team sports are good for players as it is a good way to stay fit and active, however, others believe that team sports often cause violence among the suporters. In this essay we will discuss both cocepts before drawing any conclusion.
First and foremost, team sports are effective way to keep one in good physical, emotional and social well being. sports promote fitness, boost energy in the players. For instance, players undergo physical training along with sports to get their body fit and active, so that they can perform well in the matches. Secondly, team sports build confidence and character of person.
On the other hand, some followers of one particular team get violent after the outcomes of match and perform anti-socila activities, which is not in the favour of society. For example, sometimes fans gets jealous of the rival team and starts misbeahving by breaking the things, and by calling names to the players.
To put in nutshell, one should understand the importance of team sports, and respect each and every decision and performance of the team. Overcoming the few negative impacts, team sports are good for society and for the players. Therefore, management should consider taking some strict actions or steps to control such anti-social activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13215859031 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54636982808 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616740088106 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2499115356 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0833333333 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.25397266985 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285204892289 0.242375264174 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106149591325 0.0925447433944 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807433779832 0.071462118173 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167357060072 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835979360378 0.0609392437508 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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