Many people think that successful people’s accomplishments depend on the regions they come from, while other people think that it doesn’t matter where a person comes from, if that person has the will to succeed, he/she will triumph. What do you think?.
It is a matter of debate since long time that whether region influence the success of person. Some argue that region plays vital role in shaping child's future, while on the other hand, some believe its person's own hard work which gives success not the region. In this essay we will discuss both viewpoints before drawing any conclusion.
First and foremost, it is true that region has some influence on people in a way. When a child born and brought up in an area of successful people, he always taught about their success, which gives birth to a wish in his mind to become successful. For instance, there is a village in Haryana State, India, which has produced many famous body builders, which inspire the young generation and they are also looking forward in the same direction. Secondly, when one become successful from a region, he provide facilities to promote his region due to his feeling of belolingness to the place, which generate opportunities for others to meet their goal.
On the flip side of coin, some believe it is person's own hard work, will power and confidence to do things, make him successful regardless of the region. For example, there are many actors in Bollywood, whose background is not related to cinema, but still with their continuous motivation and hard work, they become successful. Moreover, sometimes not everyone from the same region become successful.
To put in nut shell, as per a common saying, Hard work is the key to success, It is important to focus continuously on the goal, one want to achieve. Region can give you motivation and role model, but at the end of the day, it is person's will power and hard work which pay off.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 500, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'provides'.
Suggestion: provides
...one become successful from a region, he provide facilities to promote his region due to...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, for instance, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76288659794 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5080308182 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570446735395 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9335157019 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.25397266985 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192721327101 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749118693375 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03793231361 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117398940633 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238274022208 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.