Team sports are generally promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behaviour. If sporting events cause antisocial behaviour,can team spors really be good for us?
Some people think that sporting events do result in violence acts. This happens especially when one team wins its rival but the rival team supporters are not satisfied with the result. The ending action may be dangerous. However, others believe that team sports are to generate peace in stadium. In my opinion, team sports help us to grow as human being.
First of all, team sports teach us to become disciplined. Because we are contending with many other players, we develop a well sportive spirit. Thus, we learn to live with different cultural players.
Moreover, not only do team sports ward off possible strives among rival teams, but they also give the opportunity to everyone who dream of becoming a professional player, to attend a match. For instance, one of my friends who had a complicated childhood, his family income was not enough to assist him, had the chance to participate in a soccer game. Nowadays he has succeed in life and become a famous athlete.
Finally, team sports were made only to promote peace among players and they bring welfare to people who crave for being part of them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'succeeded'.
Suggestion: succeeded
...ipate in a soccer game. Nowadays he has succeed in life and become a famous athlete. F...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 1207.87684729 76% => OK
No of words: 190.0 242.827586207 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82631578947 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4462589449 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673684210526 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 379.143842365 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0002264487 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4166666667 104.977214359 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.25397266985 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249113323983 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881581712347 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075643610267 0.071462118173 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136976811961 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848053194429 0.0609392437508 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 12.6369458128 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 55.0591133005 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.94827586207 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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