team sports are generally prompted as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between the rival supporters and other form of antisocial behavior. If sporting events can lead to antisocial behavior, can team sports really be good for us?
Recently the phenomenon of antisocial behavior in sports event and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many, that sporting events is regarded thoroughly both destructive and negative by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that sports competitions are plus, and will analyze it throughout this essay.
To begin with, from sociological standpoint, the rival audience and eventually the whole country can provide the whole society with some noticeable effects which is rooted in the fact that calling harsh words or even fight are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, conducted an academic survey which discovered that the more the love of game and support of the team, there is more rage and dislike the other teams. Hence, negative ramification of organizing such events can be seen apparently.
On the other hand, within the realm of psychology, watching sports competitions increase the motivation of keeping fit and character building, Moreover, fundamental effects of sports relate to the reality that demands the merits of healthy entertainment and hobby. As a tangible example, a study from the students of a prestigious university reveals the upside of involving in the sports is a great way of keeping teenagers gets in close bound with the family and eventually drops the usage of drugs. Hence it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of sports have great influence on society.
To recapitulate, in my opinion, it is true that there now a days there are myriad fights and violence during the matches, but the merits of having sports and activates far outweigh its drawbacks.
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apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24363636364 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95050072792 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.0443033122 50.4703680194 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.2 104.977214359 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.9669160288 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1 7.25397266985 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31468054735 0.242375264174 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110806206188 0.0925447433944 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495554591006 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158962312113 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682770487927 0.0609392437508 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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