Television is an essential part of life

Essay topics:

Television is an essential part of life.

The importance of television which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. In my opinion, the former preposition appear to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate the positive effects of these trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this arguments but the most alarming one is that the television is very essential part of life because it gives some information about culture, news and, language. Moreover, the television provides us various channels such as news channels, entertainment channels and sports channels. Needless to say all these merits stand in a good stead.

Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some more merits but one of the crucial effect is that the television provides us latest news which is very fruitful because people can aware about new budgets and as well as politics information. Furthermore, the television provides some learning channels which helps to students to learn various things such as new language and they also learn their subjects easily.
According to the arguments aforementioned above one can reach a conclusion is that the benefits of television are indeed too great to ignore.

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Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...d of reasons which will further explain this arguments but the most alarming one is ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'us the latest'.
Suggestion: us the latest
... effect is that the television provides us latest news which is very fruitful because peo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...students to learn various things such as new language and they also learn their s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, such as, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 31.9359605911 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 207.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29951690821 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79313962705 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6038647343 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0965564947 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.888888889 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 7.25397266985 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162231303217 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569851872236 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703252934507 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911903286221 0.151781067708 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665554799093 0.0609392437508 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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