Television serves many functions. Watching TV makes us relax. We can learn knowledge and information from TV programs. Besides, TV can also be seen as a companion.
To what extent do you agree with this?
Much of what was made for the development and benefit of mankind frequently became harmful later, and television is one of those things. When it comes to the impact of watching TV, people’s opinions are divided about equally. However, despite the widespread belief that television nowadays is the main means of relieving stress, discovering new things and staying up to date, this essay will show that its detrimental effects should not be neglected.
To begin with, the modern television business is not aimed at making people improve their educational level, strive for the best. Generally, the main topics of the blue screen today are sex, power, money and violence. And with the advent of the Internet, TV box is no longer the best way to get knowledge or new information due to its low level and mostly negative impact. Moreover, it was noticed that if you constantly sit at the screen, you lose the habit of thinking on your own, simply accepting the information.
In addition, although television makes us relax, all programs and reality shows can only create the illusion of communication and will never substitute human interaction, let alone be perceived as a companion. TV has become so embedded in people’s lifestyle that its temporary absence can lead to depression and nervous breakdowns. Unfortunately, for many this kind of leisure is not only attractive, but also the only one.
To summarize, television is seen by many as an easy way to get some rest and useful knowledge. Nevertheless, I firmly believe that due to the low level of information and inability to replace real communication, its detrimental effects undoubtedly cancel out all the benefits.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, in addition, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09420289855 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91474641982 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663043478261 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6607583157 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.166666667 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256383818428 0.242375264174 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749874801972 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478616251769 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131446659002 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612924363696 0.0609392437508 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.