Television serves many functions Watching TV makes us relax We can learn knowledge and information from TV programs Besides TV can also be seen as a companion To what extent do you agree with this

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Television serves many functions. Watching TV makes us relax. We can learn knowledge and information from TV programs. Besides, TV can also be seen as a companion.
To what extent do you agree with this?

Nowadays television has become a very popular way to spend time and relax. For many people it has also become a companion which can even substitute real live communications. This essay will prove that TV can fulfill many functions and affect variety of areas in our life.

Firstly, television is one of the most popular ways to relax. People tend to face different problems in their day-to-day life. On another hand it's very important to get appropriate rest to recover after a hard work. Unfortunately, not everybody has enough spare time and energy at the end of a day to do some exciting activities like sports, walks, etc. That is where TV comes to help. Watching a few episodes of a TV show helps to distract attention and forget about stressful situations of the passed day.

Another point is that TV gives people a possibility to travel all around the world without a necessity to even leave their apartments. For instance, news channels not only provide a digest of the day news from the entire globe they also allow individuals to actually see foreign cities and countries. Even a short video fragment from let us say New York offers a look at the buildings, squares and parks that a fellow would probably have never seen. On another hand such traveling can be the only possible option for some categories of people who can't leave their homes due to various health issues.

In conclusion, although television has become one of the most common recreation activities for people all around the world, I believe, for others a possibility to watch news and TV shows is the only available source of information about the world around them which is almost vital necessity for any human being.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 548, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ption for some categories of people who cant leave their homes due to various health...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, look, so, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8156996587 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61338971871 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 139.433497537 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60409556314 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.086598514 50.4703680194 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.785714286 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213345994264 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720693580348 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055744906368 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130484555128 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635824501415 0.0609392437508 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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