There are a lot of inventions nowadays, which invention do you think is more important in our day-to-day life. What are the benefits and detrimental effects of it?
Nowadays, using new inventions has become a long-running dispute among the people all over the world, which leads to a moot question “which invention do you think is more important in our day-to-day life?”. It is a widely held view that the Internet as a novel invention is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that the Internet plays a vital role in the fast-changing world. Therefore, I express several reasons why I support this idea. First and foremost is that the online technology has made life so convenient and people are able to hold a video conference across the world in the fields of education, medicine, and telecommunication as well as purchase their basic needs online. Secondly, these days an extensive range of medical treatments, such as remote surgery is being operated by the Internet without physical presence. In addition to this information, a group of scientists, working at a prestigious university conducted that the cyber technology, quick access to the information, and exploring the space can be carried out simply by the Internet in the computer.
However, undoubtedly using the Internet provides people with various negative points. It should be taken into account that a wide variety of crimes, such as cybercrime, illegal access to private information, and exploiting juveniles are rooted on the Internet. Moreover, this technology has made people more likely isolated and introvert as well as the community has become significantly sedentary.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that the Internet as a invention to raise public awareness must be taken into consideration. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 303.0 242.827586207 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30363036304 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08617741923 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 139.433497537 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617161716172 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 379.143842365 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.9166056613 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.916666667 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.25397266985 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195611564062 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573729617971 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125391882576 0.071462118173 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120346074583 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155677819209 0.0609392437508 255% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 12.6369458128 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 55.0591133005 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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