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In town and cities, the large shopping malls should replace the small local shops, Do you agree or disagree ?

Essay topics: In town and cities, the large shopping malls should replace the small local shops, Do you agree or disagree ?

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The substantial influence of replacing small shops has become more controversial in recent years. Intriguingly, however some people concern that small local shops should be replace by large shopping malls while other people claim that shops cannot be replace by malls. In my opinion, number of shopping malls should be increase in cities.
To begin with, shopping malls are highly beneficial for household shopping. However, local markets are always over crowded. Shopping malls can raises demand of certain products which is not available easily in shops. Hence, fresh and better quality item are available only in shopping malls over the local shops. In the same way, everyone can find all the things at one place with the bulk of quantity. Shopping malls can make excellent infrastructure of town leads better look of city.
On the other hand, consumers can make sensible choice of a product by saving their time during shopping in malls. Shopping malls have an ability to increase the product demand. As as illustration, remarkable research in this area inevitably reveals that in India, 85 percent of local grocery markers are completely replace by the 5 shopping malls because.
Based on above discussion, it can be conclude that the large shopping malls make consumer shopping better, faster and more economical over the small shops. I tend to believe that number of shops should be decrease in town.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'replaced'?
Suggestion: replaced
...oncern that small local shops should be replace by large shopping malls while other peo...
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Line 1, column 320, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increased'?
Suggestion: increased
...ion, number of shopping malls should be increase in cities. To begin with, shopping mal...
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Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: As
...ability to increase the product demand. As as illustration, remarkable research in th...
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Line 3, column 315, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'replaced'.
Suggestion: replaced
...of local grocery markers are completely replace by the 5 shopping malls because. Based...
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Line 4, column 205, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'decreased'?
Suggestion: decreased
... believe that number of shops should be decrease in town.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, look, so, while, in my opinion, to begin with, in the same way, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17030567686 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54290990817 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585152838428 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3475487399 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5714285714 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3571428571 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387588392889 0.242375264174 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140509142012 0.0925447433944 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765186392403 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248131335094 0.151781067708 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740428007326 0.0609392437508 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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