In town and cities, large shopping malls should replace the small local shops. Do you agree or disagree?
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about globalisation and the replacement of small shops from cities and town. while it is possible to claim that the small shops are replaced with large shopping malls as part of development of cities , my view is that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analysing both sides of the argument.
There are several reasons why huge shopping malls have a greater advantages among the people nowadays. one of them is that extended shopping facility with wide variety of household items under one roof. it can also be argued that entertainment zone to the children and family by plethora of activities such as multiplexes, coffee centres and game zones. it should be taken into account that people can get all the things from one place without much struggle with higher quality as well as with lower prices from the larger shopping malls.
Those who argue for small shops are better for the people with moderate life style have a different view and say that it can be actually a money making process. Firstly, it is claimed that due to the replacement of small shops many people are feeling difficulty in their small or necessary amendments from there, moreover, many people who lost their income due to the replacement as people are more depending on the shopping malls these days. Then there are concerns about the price difference in the shopping malls and small shops.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my opinion is that shopping malls are good to the society as it helps many people in the fast paced era to save time and money, moreover, it opens more jobs opportunities to the public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81543624161 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47574333107 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536912751678 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.9244214086 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.454545455 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0909090909 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228061101872 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949534807408 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779006073795 0.071462118173 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136082664572 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712063931853 0.0609392437508 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.1260098522 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.9458128079 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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