In town and cities,the large shopping mall should replace the small local shop. Do you agree and disagree?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 221.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47058823529 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20719455408 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619909502262 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3398779648 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.909090909 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292938753612 0.242375264174 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893819465032 0.0925447433944 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.182850270318 0.071462118173 256% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165710197268 0.151781067708 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.172662878375 0.0609392437508 283% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.