In towns and cities, large shopping malls replace the small local shops.
Individuals Shopping habits were changed in the past few decades. As a result, large Shopping centres are substituting the local markets in the urban area. I believe that the shopping in shopping centers and small local stores have their own advantages and disadvantages. This essay deals with the benefits and drawbacks of shopping malls and local shops along with my opinion.
First of all, shopping malls is a big shopping center, build to attract people.people can buy every product of the best quality from these mall. Because of the high quality of products, It's hard for lower and middle class people's to purchase products. Secondly, Purchasing expensive products become a way of people's to maintain their status. They buy products of high price from shopping malls to show off their living standard. Thirdly , gaming clubs and fun zones in shopping malls attract the people of all ages. For example:- DLF MALL has an India's the biggest gaming park. Finally, shopping malls are build in large open space in particular area or out side of the city, so people need a spare time visit to malls.
On the other hand, Small shops in nearby markets fulfill the daily needs of people's, because people cannot go to shopping centers every time for little things. Moreover, these local shops offer a variety of products from low to high quality. Apart from that, few local shops gives a home delivery service. Furthermore, these local shops save time and energy of people. Because People buy things while returning from office or work.
To put it in nutshell I pen down saying that the local small shops cannot much effected in next couple of years by shopping malls.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this mall' or 'these malls'?
Suggestion: this mall; these malls
... every product of the best quality from these mall. Because of the high quality of product...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... show off their living standard. Thirdly , gaming clubs and fun zones in shopping ...
^^
Line 5, column 655, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
... large open space in particular area or out side of the city, so people need a spare tim...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, apart from, for example, in particular, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95035460993 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36744897383 2.71678728327 87% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585106382979 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7719595543 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1176470588 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5882352941 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88235294118 7.25397266985 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 2.91625615764 309% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312462410005 0.242375264174 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113061150924 0.0925447433944 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068040039122 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215268804191 0.151781067708 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573656038827 0.0609392437508 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 12.6369458128 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.