'Vegetarianism is more ethical than eating meat.”
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
Vegetarianism has increased significantly within our society over the last decades. While some people argue that it is more ethical regarding eating meat, I absolutely disagree with that statement. In this essay, I will outline my point of view by pointing out some examples.
To start with, Vegetarianism is neither healthy nor is the human nature „constructed“ to eat vegetables and fruits only. The human body is a construct of tissue, membranes, and fluid circulation, that needs vitamins and minerals. For example, a bodybuilder, who build muscles and reduce his fat portion, needs lots of protein to do so. Furthermore, protein is provided in most animal products like eggs, fish or meat, that humans need for muscle growth and body performance.
However, there are others who believe that refusing to eat animal products is ethnical correct. Some people think that animal products like milk, cheese, eggs or even their meat is bad for the human body and only vegetables are healthy. Moreover, they compare eating meat with a kind of cannibalism or claim that animals have rights too because they are a living species like humans.
In a nutshell, vegetarianism is a common phenomenon in our society and we always will be confronted with this subject. I totally believe that animal products are needed for body growth and health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: EN_QUOTES[4]
Message: Possibly wrong smart opening quote: '“'.
Suggestion: “
...neither healthy nor is the human nature „constructed' to eat vegetables and ...
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Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[7]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'will' and 'be'.
Suggestion: will always be
...common phenomenon in our society and we always will be confronted with this subject. I totally...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, while, for example, kind of, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16894977169 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89555328955 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62100456621 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.2717938477 50.4703680194 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175452569679 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658409946461 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719636470275 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112008667087 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660952729987 0.0609392437508 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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