What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in an era in which new things are constantly being invented?
Providing our era with new inventions that are constantly being renovated is always a debatable topic. Even though, many people complained that in today’s life new technologies are leading people to an unhealthy way of life. Others reject this notion and argue that such new creations like mobile handsets meet people’s desire of needs. In this case, further elaboration of both sides of the benefits and loss will be discussed in the following essay and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To begin with, new inventions could be a threat for children and teenagers to form the correct living habits. For example, new phones and gaming consoles has been promoted to young people as burgeon. As a consequence, instead of going outside and meet friends in the physical world, kids or even adults are now more likely to stay at home, enjoying their virtual life. These changing ways of life discourage people from building their abilities of social networking and communication. Not to mention that spending too much time on a computer screen is even harmful for people’s sight.
On the flip side, new things have practically solved issues within our daily work. For instance, labors involving heavy and repeating processes could be benefit from using the machine. Not only could the company save a lot of funds in massive production but it also decreases the chance of defective product to be produced.
According to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach out to conclusion that the continuous emerging of new things are key to propel the development of our society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14615384615 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81738054513 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 139.433497537 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665384615385 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0721149577 50.4703680194 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.923076923 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201534236141 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682904193756 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739623322376 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107960964574 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395452683121 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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