What are the benefits of living in big cities, as opposed to rural areas? What are the problems of rural areas and how can they be solved?
With the advancement in the technology and other trend, more and more people are moving to the cities from the rural area. There are more benefits of living in the big cities compared to the rural areas has created the chaos. Some people believe that living in the big cities has beneficial compared to the rural area. However, I strongly believe that there are more profits of living in the cities in terms of lifestyle and amenities. This essay will further deliver both positive and negative sides before jumping to the conclusion.
There are myriad benefits of living in the big cities but the most conspicuous one is there are more focal facilities available in the city like employment, education, children upbringing, and many more. In addition, in cities, one can live with full liberty and current trend. For instance, as per the recent survey by the local newspaper, there are many people who are moving to the cities and there is a significant increase in the selling of new apartment.
However, there are also shortcomings exist with the above positive sides. Firstly, in the city people are having lifestyle as if they are middle-of-the-road. Secondly, they are not living with the liberty and not allow others to live with the liberty. Going ahead, in a rural area, there are no basic facilities available like the transport, medical, and so on.
Apparently, the problems of rural areas can be solved if younger generation educates the elder. They should tell them about the recent improvements. Slowly and gradually, it will change the attitude of the older generation. Besides this, the government can introduce more expansion in the villages, so the people do not have to look up to the cities for fulfilling their supplies.
In the view of the above points, it is noticeable that living in cities is more beneficial rather than in the cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 31.9359605911 153% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 315.0 242.827586207 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93968253968 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67115268926 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488888888889 0.580463131201 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.721881192 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5294117647 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269142234187 0.242375264174 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969863011229 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10505149376 0.071462118173 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144941827732 0.151781067708 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611935410424 0.0609392437508 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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