What are the positive and negative of tourism in developing countries?
Let’s begin by looking at the positives of the tourism. One of the major effect on the economy. Tourism play vital role in the employment sector such as hotels and cafes. Some people work as a tour guide and in restaurants. As a result they create plethora of opportunities for employment.
Turning towards to negative side of the argument, nowadays ample diseases are in the community which can transfer from one country to another. Moreover, in the developing countries they are seen as a soft target and they are going through threat of kidnapping and so on. So the local government can suffer from problems related to the safety and security.
To conclude, tourism play cardinal role for developing countries. We have to overweigh the merits of economic growth and the demerits of security.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, so, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 20.9802955665 19% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 686.0 1207.87684729 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 134.0 242.827586207 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11940298507 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 3.92707691288 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77479506206 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 139.433497537 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641791044776 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 379.143842365 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6685506668 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6 104.977214359 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4 20.9669160288 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229494160715 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662614795568 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721051925844 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124849072331 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00997375701744 0.0609392437508 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 22.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 90
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