What is the strength and weakness of the public transportation system in your country

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What is the strength and weakness of the public transportation system in your country?

The strength and weakness of the public transportation system in a country has attracted numerous controversies and drawn the attention from the public. It is argued that public transportation has many merits, however, some people claim that there are weakness that need to be improved as well. This article will elaborate both side of views on public transportation and thus lead to a constructive conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous advantages that public transportation bring to people's life, and the most conspicuous one lies in the fact that it provides a convenient mean of travel in cities. From my personal experience, many bus stations and train stops in my country are constructed near shopping malls, schools and hospitals, which offers an accessible transport service for all kind of people. Therefore, it has in many ways save travel time for people.
Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks, which can certainly overwhelm the potential benefits, and the most alarming one stems from the fact that public transportation is not always the best choice for traveling in the city. For example, during rush hours, majority of people want to catch an early bus, while sometimes people get tripped over because there are too crowed, which poses a threat to public safety.
Considering all the substantial insights which are outlined above, one can safely reach a conclusion that public transport means have both advantages and disadvantages. To address this issue, governments and societies need to make a concerted effort to find solutions.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 82, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
...ges that public transportation bring to peoples life, and the most conspicuous one lies...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3064516129 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96092968146 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5697488394 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.6 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270218149394 0.242375264174 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113174330675 0.0925447433944 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133247246366 0.071462118173 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163740600903 0.151781067708 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140930271573 0.0609392437508 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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