What is your opinion about top executive at companies getting their employees involved in the decision –making process?

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What is your opinion about top executive at companies getting their employees involved in the decision –making process?

Many companies keep their decision-making process exclusive to top executive and hesitate to involve their lower employees. Whereas, some companies believe in the potential of their lower level employees and involve them in the decision making process. This essay will discuss why it is important to include the lower level employees in decision making process.
It is always a good idea to participate the lower level employees in decision making process because it makes them feel inclusive. This feeling of belongingness will increase the productive of the employees as they feel they have to give their 100% for the company where they belong and which hear their voice. Moreover, it will also decrease the employee turnover. Basically, reason for high turnover is the negligence of the views and idea of the employee, and exclusion from the decision making process is perfect example of that.
For instance, in big companies like Apple, employee’s turnover is high because they generally do not involve lower level employees in decision making process which results in low job satisfaction and motivates them to leave the company.
To sum up, in my opinion it is very crucial for the companies to involve lower level employees in decision making process.

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Average: 5.5 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, whereas, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 203.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25123152709 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76492067392 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 139.433497537 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492610837438 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 330.3 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1266943603 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.444444444 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397349423087 0.242375264174 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205254311504 0.0925447433944 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109379250103 0.071462118173 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282607767128 0.151781067708 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897797977725 0.0609392437508 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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