Whether the design of the building will have a positive or negative impact on people's life and work?

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Whether the design of the building will have a positive or negative impact on people's life and work?

It has long been a subject of discussion whether building design has positive or negative impact of everyday's life. In my opinion, the former notion has several strong elements that deserve attention and I will explain why using pertinent arguments.

My viewpoint has a myriad of arguments. The most perceptible one, to start with, lies in the fact that majority of assertions based on unbiased figures obtained from global and local sources. Not only does it reveals some astonishing figures that prove the point of design of building has more positive impact on people's life and work, but also it encourages one to consider more details further down the track. It gives a transparent and logical reasoning to the people of today's world about advantages of building design which made according to their lifestyle. For example, in Australia people who look for accommodation or business properties, design of the building is the first matter of their concern. Self-evidently, all these viewpoints stand building design in good stead,as far as people's life and work satisfaction concerned.

Another vital facet of the argument is that, based on some real-time facts and figures. People are taking crucial decision after considering all associated merits and demerits. Besides a few shortcomings, It is up to the authorities to further educate the people and allow them to take a sensible decision. Therefore, it is quite evident that why many are in favor of my viewpoints.

From what has discussed above, one can conclude that benefits of building design on everyday's life of people are too great to ignore.

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Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, so, therefore, for example, in my opinion, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17175572519 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80596659228 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610687022901 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4510856699 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.230769231 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371015058315 0.242375264174 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109707734435 0.0925447433944 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121174813759 0.071462118173 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200211852899 0.151781067708 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102539313861 0.0609392437508 168% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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