Which car will you prefer large or small

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Which car will you prefer large or small

Recently the phenomenon of selling cars in the automobile industry and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many presence of different varieties ranging from low budget to premium cars is highly beneficial, such issues is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that market should be flexible to offer cars in all ranges though with some pros and cons on each model and I will analyze that throughout this essay.

From a social standpoint, the modern life can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that both crucial issues and final outcomes are inextricably bound up. According to my experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic survey on the car segments which discovered the purchase power of the customer from middle to higher class. Each of them chose the car which fits to their budget. Thus, the beneficial ramifications of the market presence of cars of all types targetting their intended customers apparently can be seen.

Within the realm of public arena, the luxurious car might increase the consequneces of critical needs. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted the downside of getting attracted to luxury cars though they are out of budget, and easily giving anegative impact in society.

To conclude, while there are compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that an individual must understand the need and buy the car which fits his budget. The market does offer different segments based on the features of the car but its always advantageous to go for a budget car. Not only the advantages of the buying habit of customer proves significance of the this unique phenomenon bbut also pinpoints thorny issues' potential implications.

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Average: 8.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun presence seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much presence', 'a good deal of presence'.
Suggestion: much presence; a good deal of presence
... a heated debate. Although contested by many presence of different varieties ranging from low...
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Line 10, column 375, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...abit of customer proves significance of the this unique phenomenon bbut also pinpoints t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, if, so, thus, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 307.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25081433225 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89426099426 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 139.433497537 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615635179153 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.7979820849 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.333333333 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.25397266985 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179283588114 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688394638316 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385949371042 0.071462118173 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104226464263 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256716991626 0.0609392437508 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 55.0591133005 183% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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