The world’s governments and organizations are facing a lot of issues. Which do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants on our planet and give the solution?
Recently, the phenomenon of determining the first priority task of governments which leads to creating concerns among the populations and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although a number of individuals asserted that the increase of the rate of population growth is the essential task, others believe that the global warming is the most fundamental issue that should first be addressed. I am inclined to believe that the global warming is quite significant.
From a social standpoint, there are several reasons why the global warming has detrimental effects on our planet. These are rooted in the fact of industrialism. From my own experience when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered these demerits. Firstly, the global warming leads to an array of difficulties including rising the sea levels, creating drastic hurricanes and climate change. The governments should have some vital strategies to control and tackle them. Namely, they should allocate specific budgets to spend in industries to utilize modern technology in order to diminish the pollution. Furthermore, the governments should perform some special schemes in order to enhance the awarrness among the dwellers to decline the waste in energy.
On the other hand, some other inhabitants argue that the topic of incrasing the population in countries are the most significant issue that the governments should focus on them. They asserted that the governments should balance the number of population with the food supply, facilities, schools, hospitals and everythings that human need to live.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the global warming is most crucial duty that need more liabilities to address.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51798561151 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94750756377 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561151079137 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.766925449 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0879354310184 0.242375264174 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0297473373665 0.0925447433944 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261408106897 0.071462118173 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0516171409282 0.151781067708 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173602338923 0.0609392437508 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 55.0591133005 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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