In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?
Recently, the phenomenon of a classless payment and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of debit cards is highly beneficial such issue is regarded by thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantials number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that short-time credit card can be a plus and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that the merits of long-term credit, as well as unsecured credit card, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered a valid credit card. thus, beneficial ramifications of both paper money and the role of bank apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, a cashless society might increase the consequences of electronic banking. moreover, the fundamental aspects of a method of payment could relate to this reality that the demerits of electronic services pertain to the online bank. as a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of a loan bank is correlated negatively with a bank account. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of a card bank.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I extremely believe that the benefits of a financial transaction far outweigh its drawbacks. not only do the advantages of a financial organization prove the significance of the role of electronic banking but also pinpoint a bank balance implication.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35664335664 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17100290537 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 139.433497537 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604895104895 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2730955421 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.846153846 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.25397266985 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249933058763 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775217131503 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130397334447 0.071462118173 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12606254855 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141301456961 0.0609392437508 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 55.0591133005 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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