Do you prefer to do things by using your hands or by using machines?

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Do you prefer to do things by using your hands or by using machines?

When I have to do certain activities I have the choice to do it by using my hands or by using machines. By using only my hands make the final result more original. Even though I like the original things I prefer to have results with perfect quality and faster. That is why I prefer to do some works by using machines.

To start with, doing some works by using machines instead of do it by using my hands allows me to have my work done with perfect quality. When I had to write an essay I only used a piece of paper and a pencil. I loved how perfect my calligraphy looks in the final hand-written paper . In contrast, sometimes I had some grammatical errors and even more I also had some orthography errors. That is why I currently only use my computer to have my work perfectly done. I use some tools that help me to correct my work like spelling checker, world count tool, and even grammar corrector. Now I am able to produce my essay in a perfect way.

Having machines to do my work not only improves the quality of my results, but also helps me to do my work faster. I used to work in a vitamins retail store and when I had to do manual inventories took me days to finish my work. The company bought counting’s machines that make me do my inventories reviews faster. Now, I only have to be sure the products are placing correctly in rows. I scan the first item in the row an enter the amount of item in the machine. The machine goes connected to the computer and my work is done in 2 hours.

As a conclusion, I prefer to do my work by using machines than by using my hands. My work is perfectly done and it is done on time.

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Sentence: I scan the first item in the row an enter the amount of item in the machine.
Description: An article is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to an and enter

flaws:
No. of Different Words: 134 200
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.684 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.612 7.5

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 18 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 317 350
No. of Characters: 1280 1500
No. of Different Words: 134 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.22 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.038 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.328 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 71 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 51 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 31 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.684 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.612 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.211 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.432 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.561 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.151 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5