TPO-22 : Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the contemporary society, teachers have become more and more influential to the students. This phenomenon arouses a hot debate over whether teachers should expose their social and political views known to students in the classroom. As far as I am concerned, teachers should not reveal their social or political views in front of students.
First of all, students are at the important stage of forming their values and they should be exposed to the objective views about the society and politic, instead of being influenced by the subjective views from their teachers. It is undeniable that some positive views from the teachers may help the students to view the world positively, but what if the teachers hold an negative views about our society? Students are just not mature enough to make judgement on those views.
Moreover, it may create conflicts in the classroom if the teachers express their social or political views, which are contradictary to the students' views. For example, the last presidential campaign of United States caused so much conflicts in the society because people support different parties were strongly against each other. If the students find out their teachers support the opposite party , their respect to the teachers may be discounted. Once this happens, not only conflicts will be created but also the students' academic performance may be affected.
Last but not least, not to discuss personal social or political views in unsuitable occasions is also a way to show respect to the other people. Same idea applies on the teachers as to respect their students in the classroom. Admittedly, everyone has the right to express their views about the society, but under the proper occasion. For example, if the teachers are invited to give a speech about a social topic, they may be allowed to express their opinion. Or if the teachers are asked by a student to discuss a political event privately, there is no problem to talk neither. However, it is just not proper to discuss their personal views in front of the whole class, which are not related the academic subject at all.
In summary, with the above stated reasons, I think teachers should not reveal their social or political views to the students in the classroom
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, as to, for example, i think, in summary, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.032 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59642992132 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474666666667 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8223858577 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0588235294 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311938445218 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122413732943 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081528070604 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216311519441 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579932076473 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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