Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Nowadays there are many different opinion about professional athletics who are actually successful. Some people believe on being unfair and in contrast some other approve their earning. Totally about any social subject different considering exist, although high salary of the successful sports is wonderful but we shouldn’t remember that this income is not conventional for all of them.
High earning of professional athletics usually is announced in nation and has a great feedback in nation. Some people think that this content of money must not pay to this group although other skilled men could hardly ever gain like salary. While their opinion is approximately acceptable but they should know that, high salary is just for high level sports whose count are not so great. In addition in every area there are some professional people whose salary is more than many famous sports.
A group of people but think that in spite of high salary, anybody is not entitled to judge about this. They believe that anybody due to their ability could have a good salary such as athletics. This group of society effort to make a good lifestyle, and ever never don’t compare their selves with other person. Actually they have gotten ambition with succeeding of other.
On the whole I think that personal lives of any body is depending on their own. In other word, the sports earning until haven’t a negative effect on nation living is their privacy unless disturb people attitude and outlook. So we aren’t allowed to judge other people as we have never thought about lifestyle of great businessman or any other the rich. Therefore we have to use to living on our own without considering living of other people and if anybody had any successfully it would get due to their attempting.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
Nowadays there are many different opinion about professional athletics wh...
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Line 2, column 393, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...sports whose count are not so great. In addition in every area there are some profession...
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Line 4, column 45, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anybody'?
Suggestion: anybody
...he whole I think that personal lives of any body is depending on their own. In other wor...
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Line 4, column 54, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...I think that personal lives of any body is depending on their own. In other word, the sports...
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Line 4, column 256, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'judging'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: judging
... and outlook. So we aren't allowed to judge other people as we have never thought a...
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Line 4, column 364, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...eat businessman or any other the rich. Therefore we have to use to living on our own wit...
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Line 4, column 527, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y it would get due to their attempting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, so, therefore, while, i think, in addition, in contrast, such as, in spite of, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02684563758 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5841540877 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536912751678 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9002321255 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8666666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337242880249 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112896200632 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709860851455 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203968137802 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624729375023 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.