It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what agree do you agree or disagree?
It is clear that, kids should distinguish correct things from incorrect, and also penalty should be applied to teach them. Although children should differentiate between right and wrong, I vastly disagree by punishing.
Punishment used to apply to teach children like discriminate between correct and incorrect things, but by passing the time it has been approved that, punishment may make bad effects on personality of people, especially if they faced this situation in early ages. In addition people who experienced the penalty inasmuch as learning, hardly could they forget what happened. In other word, punishing in early age may influence on soul of people and lead them to be never be kindness by other people. Apart from what has been said, any person is not entitled to annoy others unless by permitting of law and legal regulation have never let anybody.
On the hand, it is necessary for children to know the right and wrong especially at the first age of lifespan, why in this time principle institutionalize in character of people and will have never been forgotten. Also, if people are able to distinguish the correct from incorrect, the society will never face the criminal activity, in fact by teaching kids how to differentiate good and bad, we vouch the future of society why not only do not this people wrong activity but also deter others from bad activity. Because of these fact, some psychologist believe that a culture of a nation could not progress unless children accept these new culture.
In conclusion, I could infer, it is deniable that children should take lesson about wrong and right in first their ages, but punishment is not an appropriate way for learning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01418439716 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70928483825 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567375886525 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.8379518492 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.4 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194797896064 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813971808363 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605071251129 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11791263642 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00470167442666 0.056905535591 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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