In many countries nowadays, young single people no longer stay with their parents until they are married, but leave to study or work somewhere else. Do you think this trend has more advantages or disadvantages?
In today's world, youth face with dilemma, whether it is sensible action to leave parents' house as soon as it possible. I personally believe that, the benefits of this approach outweigh its drawbacks.
On the one hand, people believe youngsters are not matured enough to live by themselves or make the best decisions. For instance, being lonely make them more vulnerable to lead to depression or turn to use drugs or alcohols. In addition, generally, when young people live with family do not have any anxious about financial problems. Furthermore, in case of educational study, probably they could be more concentrated.
On the other hand, choosing to be independent have built whole their future life. Firstly, searching for desires make them more experienced. Because, in new situation, they take all responsibilities about themselves like doing all housework, paying bills, doing laundry. So they should learn how to manage their time and money to do other tasks. Secondly, leaving home either to study further or finding job might make better chances for them in case some cities or countries may not have fine educational facilities or good job opportunities. Moreover, it could be helpful for economic condition of their families in case of saving money. Parents could pay their money into their own pension plans.
In conclusion, one of the requirements of being matured is coming out of parents wings. The first step might be lived independently. It is worth starting new situations, despite of its difficulties. While, the youth have to be more wise.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ituations, despite of its difficulties. While, the youth have to be more wise. ...
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Suggestion:
...ile, the youth have to be more wise.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17716535433 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8524837902 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633858267717 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7488436369 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3529411765 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9411764706 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165825886171 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484989297084 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313468818651 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907297867943 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367482139731 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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