Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. there should be no government restrictions on what they do.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The freedom issue is placed in civil rights. Although an artist need to be seen by people to success, there are some problem by allowing them to show all aspect of their ideas.
From one side, it is completely acceptable that everyone for success requires to some encouragement from other people in any situation especially artists. It is undeniable that artworks are the source of culture. In addition, some artist in its own time was not able to attract a great acceptance but over the years is explored its talents. So it could make a country in weak position to be well-known in around the world or improve the credibility of a country. The most important thing, the presence of art through a society could make sense of creativity and novelty. I think this society could be more happy.
From the other side, it must be considered each nation has its own beliefs. Social, political or even moral issues make different limit on artists to express ideas freely. Some artists have got strange opinions about religions which make religious people angry. Each governments or regimes have their own critics among artists so political expedient do not let them have complete freedom in declaring their ideas.
In conclusion, I believe, artists should respect for various beliefs in society, in contrast, receive their freedom in expressing thoughts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'problems'?
Suggestion: problems
...en by people to success, there are some problem by allowing them to show all aspect of ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...heir freedom in expressing thoughts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03555555556 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61095129535 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635555555556 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6022471946 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1538461538 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174501875728 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564927533198 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430622836151 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107346341975 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032651215266 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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