Politicians should pursue common ground and reasonable consensus rather than elusive ideals.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the

This topic raises the controversial issue whether politicians ought to pursue common ground and reasonable consensus rather that elusive ideals. Indisputably, the rule of politicians are very crucial in the residents life and we can measure people standard living from the politicians effort. However, from my point of view, I totally agree that politicians have to pursue common ground and reasonable consensus instead of elusive ideals. To substantiate my case, this essay will elaborate my reasons and examples clearly.

To begin with, it is irrefutable that the politicians rules are very important and they hold a lot of responsibilities to flourish their countries. On one hand, they have to save the internal and external country's conditions. In other words, they have to be serious in their working by facing any problem then analyzing and find the best solutions to burgeon the country and prevents any further complications.

Furthermore, the outstanding politician who is able to listen, negotiates and have flexible thinking methods, more than that he is able to use innovative ideas and apply it in the real life. One striking example is Mahatma Gandi who is responsible about millions people and by using sagacious skills and clear mind he was able to take the people agreement and love.

Last but not least, from a different angles the politician who uses a elusive thoughts will lead to multifarious problems in both his personal life and the country at all, To elaborate it take a look on these points. Firstly, people will mistrust him and will increase the debates between opponents and proponents then the local argument will be bigger and it may lead to unstable condition. One vivid example is all the middle east regions complain from unsuccessful politicians because they used to use elusive plans to mislead the residents and that led to open war and conflicts.

In conclusion, due to aforementioned reasons and examples, the best politician who is able to be an open mind and has a deep insight to the current situations. Further, the elusive thoughts will lead to myriad problems in their countries.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, then, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 348.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14655172414 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88549677243 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548850574713 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4732809168 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.928571429 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.21951772744 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172771391815 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686337171931 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893840428339 0.0758088955206 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911884800813 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918367771418 0.0667264976115 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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