Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
To improve the quality of education, universities should spend money on salaries university professors.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is a big debate on the link between spend high salaries on the academic staff and improvement the educational system. And I think that there are a lot of methods to improve it if the goal is improving the education system. And from my point of view, I am not favor the link between increase professors stipends and enhance the quality of the education.
First of all, we are in a very modern world, and we should assure presence of the innovation in our thinking process if we want higher and awesome education system. Moreover, we should think out the box to create the most simple and useful solutions for our concerns. On the one hand, if we want best education we should look to the university infrastructure like presence of labs with different types for chemistry, engineer, and medical students. And the new trend is the simulation labs that mimics the real life. And the vivid example is my university, Jordan university of science and technology for closer look school of nursing has the biggest and the most advance simulation lab and the other universities come to take look on this site. And because of this advancement in my university, it become from the 500 universities on the world and the first on the medial east.
On the other hand, spend these money just on the professors salaries useless or without real goal at the end these are employee and they perform their job. In contrast, build a huge library can help the students to get the maximum benefit. For instance my university has the biggest library in the medial east. In addition, ensure the availability of the internet connection for free so they can help them a lot.
In conclusion, I think my point of view is strong and solid enough to clarify all the previous reasons, and I believe that we can widen our thinking process to higher the quality of the education. And the most important is to think in simple manner.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: favored
...em. And from my point of view, I am not favor the link between increase professors st...
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Suggestion:
...between increase professors stipends and enhance the quality of the education. ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'want the best'.
Suggestion: want the best
...or our concerns. On the one hand, if we want best education we should look to the univers...
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...rsities come to take look on this site. And because of this advancement in my unive...
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Suggestion: becomes
...f this advancement in my university, it become from the 500 universities on the world ...
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Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'these moneys', 'these monies'?
Suggestion: this money; these moneys; these monies
...dial east. On the other hand, spend these money just on the professors salaries useless...
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...n for free so they can help them a lot. In conclusion, I think my point of view ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, moreover, so, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6765578635 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61787673957 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489614243323 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 498.6 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1205320275 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.066666667 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154342520112 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487573043398 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352275735297 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825177976709 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325936430725 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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