In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In every corner of the globe, governments are elected so that new constructions and improvements can occur. Once in the power every establishment is under dilemma whether to improve current infrastructure or construct new technologically advanced mode of travel.In the same context, some school of business are in the favour of former while other believe bullet trains must be introduced. I feel both the infrastructures are equally important, hence both the notions should be scrutinised before passing any conviction.
Admittedly, existing public transport is in reach of everyone and people have scheduled themselves in according to that. Improving the infrastructure within the cities will help citizens as they are dependent on them. For an illustration, people of Delhi and national capital regions use Delhi-Metro for travel and live can not be supposed with it. Increasing the number of trains will be more beneficial for them. However, with the continuous improvements, a time will come when things will get absolute and there will be no scope for further construction.
For the daily requirements, plethora of people travel everyday from one city to another and high speed trains will influence them to travel via them. Current trains even on their peak performance are unable to render them according to their time and ultimately, they suffer. With the new bullet trains, people can live in their hometown instead if renting in the another city. Indeed, with such service, there will be a price to pay and many will not be able to afford them and can be a disaster for any nation.
Weighing all the notions holistically, it can be concluded that both the modes are equally important and authorities should spend equal parts of their revenue on both the infrastructures.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: In
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21527777778 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01000613951 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590277777778 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.172247686 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.538461538 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207565764622 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767250492171 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363075852224 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125929144028 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362820719546 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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