The teachers, friends and their parents are important characters in every individual life. Although family involvement in their most of the life still who influence more is a controversial question between the friends and teachers. Some people believe students are more influenced by their friends and others assume are with lectures. Personally, I am convicted of the children's are highly influenced with their buddies because they spend more time with them and more trust.
First, children's are likely to spend a lot of time with their friends because they like fun and that is not possible with their professor. In addition to that, people are comfortable with their friends because they trust each other and they are feasible to take advice from them. For example, when I was studying my graduation, I had a difficulty to pay my last semester tuition fee and I asked my friend for support without any hesitation. I don't think that is possible with teachers even though they earn. So friends always Impact more than any others.
Second, If people have the same age group, obviously they have mutual understandings because of their similarities. when a person is same age group they understand the situation better than then the older people. In fact, lectures are old and experienced but still, children's like to accept their friendly advice. For Instant when I was studying high school, I was poor in maths so my friend suggested a group study on other hands my teacher suggested the private class. even though my teacher suggestion is good I accepted my friend idea and started group studies.
In conclusion, based on the age similarity and the time we spend, people are more influenced by their friends compared to other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, still, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 289.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98961937716 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63114150447 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539792387543 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8308026917 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1333333333 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183624772619 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794222987417 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529931228763 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131779224628 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580904697536 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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