TPO-05 - Integrated Writing Task As early as the twelfth century A.D., the settlements of Chaco Canyon in New Mexico in the American Southwest were notable for their "great houses," massive stone buildings that contain hundreds of rooms and often stand th

The reading discuss use of Chaco canyon in new Mexico in American southwest was notable for massive building and contains 100 rooms ,although the lecturer was not agree , because although building from inside are looking like American ,but from out side its cast doubt.

First, the reading claims that structure of building clearly shows that its a purely residential and at each houses hundred people could live , however the lecture provide evidence of 10 fire places in the structure ,so if hundered of people was living there , there must be more fire places as well.

Second, the reading found store of food supply like maize crops and they store maize crops for long periods of time without spoiling , the lecturer dispute the argument by pointing out if green maize crops was stored than why maize crops scattered on floors.

Finally, the reading states that houses used for special ceremonies and gathering of large number of people ,because large number of broken pots found in area, in contrast lecturer said its not convincing , because another material such as sand , stone were found in area as well. it can be trush of construction not evidence of ceremonies.

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Average: 7.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The reading discuss use of Chaco canyon in new Mexic...
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Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... massive building and contains 100 rooms ,although the lecturer was not agree , be...
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Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...00 rooms ,although the lecturer was not agree , because although building from inside...
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Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...oms ,although the lecturer was not agree , because although building from inside a...
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Line 1, column 236, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ng from inside are looking like American ,but from out side its cast doubt. Fi...
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Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
...ide are looking like American ,but from out side its cast doubt. First, the reading ...
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Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...tructure of building clearly shows that its a purely residential and at each houses...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...a purely residential and at each houses hundred people could live , however the lecture...
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Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...at each houses hundred people could live , however the lecture provide evidence of...
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Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...dence of 10 fire places in the structure ,so if hundered of people was living ther...
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Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o if hundered of people was living there , there must be more fire places as well....
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Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...or long periods of time without spoiling , the lecturer dispute the argument by po...
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Line 7, column 108, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... and gathering of large number of people ,because large number of broken pots foun...
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Line 7, column 205, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ontrast lecturer said its not convincing , because another material such as sand ,...
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Line 7, column 245, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... , because another material such as sand , stone were found in area as well. it ca...
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Line 7, column 282, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...and , stone were found in area as well. it can be trush of construction not eviden...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, look, second, so, well, in contrast, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 12.0772626932 25% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 22.412803532 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 1373.03311258 72% => OK
No of words: 195.0 270.72406181 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04615384615 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32967603137 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630769230769 0.540411800872 117% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 419.366225166 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 21.2450331126 184% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.2804621646 49.2860985944 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 196.8 110.228320801 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.0 21.698381199 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.6 7.06452816374 221% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 4.19205298013 382% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280080645872 0.272083759551 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129115025674 0.0996497079465 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366104556359 0.0662205650399 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150426364591 0.162205337803 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00676537391367 0.0443174109184 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.9 13.3589403974 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 53.8541721854 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.0289183223 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 63.6247240618 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 10.7273730684 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.498013245 168% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.2008830022 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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