How do movies or television influence people's behavior? use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
Some people think television and movies has great impact up on the people. Beacuse people can take some important information about something. However, others believe that television or movies are really harmful for people. In my opinion, those could be harmful for some people but they are really good influence to people. I will explain why I am thinking like that beacuse of several significant reasons.
Firstly, people could learn some valuable knowledge from television or movies. For example, documanteries are able to benefical for people. People can take huge information about something who watch a documantery. I remember to when I was a child, I had watched a documantery. It is about history of Turkey and there were very significant details about Turkey, so I had learnt system of army in Ottoman Empires. I was given huge satisfactioning by this documentary beacuse I had been believing that when I watched one of Ottoman Empires documentary. Beacuse of this reason I think television and movies could improve people knowledge about something dramaticly.
Secondly, people could be happy with a funny television show or movies. In the other definition, people need to be happy in all time of their life. In this condition, funny television show or movies are best way to be happy. For instance, I watch a television show which name is Jey Leno show. I am taking great pleasure by this show. This show usually evaluations politics in funny way. However, despite Jey Leno show about funny, it lead to think about politics and people life. In this circumstances, television and movies are good for people.
Finally, people are learning news by television. I believe that it is the most important part of television. Beacuse people get to chance learn what happend all over the world. Moreover they can take some precaution about their life with wisdom. Besides, movies has capable for influence on people thinks. I remember I was a student in University. I had watched a movies which is about people of Syria. It is about Syria domestic war and their bad effect up on people. After I had watched that movie, my opinion was changed by this movie.
All in all movies and television are beneficial and they have good influence on people beacuse of these reasons. Despite people watch unuseful movies or televisions program, it has not mean television and movies are harmful for people. On the contarst I have great experiences about benefical of television and movies for people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2085.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01201923077 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7494357527 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.420673076923 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 676.8 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.272681886 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.15625 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.6045352989 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.40625 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17710895737 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596357134447 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602491965444 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125834280471 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466420953975 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.89 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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