Buying things online such as books,air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Buying things online is one of the most important trend today. In this fast pacing world, all humans are finding out new ways to make their life easy and comfortable with some trickey ways. Online shopping has a major role in this. It has some pros and cones and its advantages obviously outweigh its disadvantages in my point.
Firsty, online shopping can save ones time at a great extent. To cite an example, we can buy things online at any time if we have an internet connection and a credit or debit card at hands. Furthermore, we can buy things according to our wish. Sometimes, we need to visit different kind of shops for some items which stucks in our mind. In such cases, with the tip of our hands we can search such things online and can buy those within the time. Besides this, we can search different kinds of things at home and can buy such things according to our financial capacity.
On the other hand, these online shopings has some demerits. It can fool a customer very easily and sometimes we loose our money due to unautherized product information. Some online sites are giving information about a hiquality product and when we receive that there is a chance to get it as a wrong one. People must be aware of such things.Smetimes, it may catch our credit card informations also.
To conclude, online shopping can save ones time and energey and its makes our life more easy compare to the past. Eventhough, we must be alert about the fake products and internent traps. So, which choosing online shopping, people must select autharized sites company products for theis safety and money garanty.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, if, may, so, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68661971831 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50578333243 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573943661972 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2066968668 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.2941176471 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205252431429 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742000047015 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527161520598 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121413237547 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061490413776 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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