Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Although Modernism has brought many benefits to our lives, it has also been associated with overpopulation, traffic congestion and lack of accommodation as well. It is true fact that over crowdedness of cities formants undesirable circumstances which is not in control like traffic jam, and many others of that ilk. I’m of the opinion that such predicaments can be solved somehow with relocating people from city center to rural areas. And I think it would be for better off of both city dwellers and those working in factories.
Firstly, traffic has always been a serious dilemma for people living in large cities and this cannot be averted without government action toward it. There is one possible option for government to implement a law forcing employers of large firms and factories and their perspective employees into moving out from city center into suburb to work and reside there. This will decline not only the number of vehicles commuting into city streets in rush hours every day, but also relieve the pressure of urban life considerably as well. For instance, the city I’m living is overpopulated because of number of commuters coming here for work. The city has many vacant posts available according to people’s taste which makes it special to their eyes.
Secondly, another problem, that people living in large cities always encounter, is lack of living places that has been a major concern for many working people who come to these cities to earn living. As the movement of many job seekers to these cities is on increase, subsequently the demand for accommodation goes up as well. This puts up the price and also makes people live in poor quality places with fewer facilities expected. Relocating industrial areas from city center to countryside opens the door to both workers in finding a better place to live and also urban citizens in making existing places in city available for them.
In overall, it’s up to government to do some changes in metropolitan cities and reduce the stress on individuals and make city a better place for everyone in it. And I think this relocation will be advantageous for people in several respects mentioned above.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i think, in fact, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04132231405 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70946967749 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534435261708 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4441875393 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190933995018 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704209784177 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361696964211 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12326615081 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291608733065 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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