Write a letter to a restaurant manager. In your letter,•Explain that you would like to apply for the job•Give some details of any relevant experience that you have•Specify the days and times that would suit you

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Write a letter to a restaurant manager. In your letter,
• Explain that you would like to apply for the job
• Give some details of any relevant experience that you have
• Specify the days and times that would suit you

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my interest the available accountants job which was advertised on the website www.jobs.ae.

my education consist of Bachelors degree in accounting from India, there after I worked in various companies in accounts place. Since I have worked in ABC company as an accountant for about nine years I exposure towards vendors and contractors are higher which makes me a better candidate for this position.

Due to certain personal reasons I am not able to work as a permanent staff in a company. So when I saw your advert on the website with a flexible timing encouraged me to apply for it. As you have mentioned I would like to mention my personal preference for working hours. The most convinent work hours will be from 1pm till 6pm on week days and mornings 7 till 11 on weekends. I would prefer to have one day off from work, it would preferably by on a weekend.

I would appreciate if you could consider my application.
Yours faithfully,
Arun

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my interest the ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
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Line 4, column 68, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
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...helors degree in accounting from India, there after I worked in various companies in accoun...
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Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ider my application. Yours faithfully, Arun
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76300578035 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8211408883 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.693641618497 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4006188071 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 4.34317383033 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20103029785 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082251747553 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747821690117 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116285834649 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755368256844 0.0580467560999 130% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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