A pet food company recalled 4 million pounds of pet food in response to complaints that pets that had consumed the food experienced vomiting, lethargy, and other signs of illness. After the recall, the pet food company tested samples from the recalled food and determined that all chemicals found in the food were chemicals that are approved for use in pet food. Thus, the recalled food was not responsible for these symptoms, and the company should not devote further resources to the investigation.
In the argument, it is stated that 'A pet food company' had tested the samples, whereas we don't whether they are nationally approved or not. we are not sure if the pet food company's lab itself made the tests, against which the complaints were. so, this is vague here.
Again, there is a big question about the types of pets. Like, foods made for cats, can not be fed to birds, while both are pets. so, it is not mentioned specifically that, what are the types of 'pets'? are they covering all pets foods by supplying one kind?
Even if it is proved that chemicals are pet-friendly, it is not sure that for which type of weather-country the foods are made and to which they are sent. if it's made for warm countries and sent to colder ones, there must be problems.
pet's age also matters. if baby foods are fed to adult foods, there must have critical situation. so, it is not mentioned clearly either.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...er they are nationally approved or not. we are not sure if the pet food companys l...
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...sts, against which the complaints were. so, this is vague here. Again, there is...
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...t be fed to birds, while both are pets. so, it is not mentioned specifically that,...
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...cally that, what are the types of pets? are they covering all pets foods by supplyi...
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...ds are made and to which they are sent. if its made for warm countries and sent to...
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...colder ones, there must be problems. pets age also matters. if baby foods are fed...
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... be problems. pets age also matters. if baby foods are fed to adult foods, ther...
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...ds, there must have critical situation. so, it is not mentioned clearly either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.9520958084 23% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 55.5748502994 20% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 16.3942115768 18% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 742.0 2260.96107784 33% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 166.0 441.139720559 38% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46987951807 5.12650576532 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 4.56307096286 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37116882012 2.78398813304 85% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 204.123752495 48% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590361445783 0.468620217663 126% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 705.55239521 32% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 22.8473053892 57% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3435721137 57.8364921388 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.8333333333 119.503703932 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.8333333333 23.324526521 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.70786347227 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321997097959 0.218282227539 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11363954375 0.0743258471296 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984327193849 0.0701772020484 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196820099538 0.128457276422 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809945884491 0.0628817314937 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 14.3799401198 45% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 48.3550499002 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 12.197005988 49% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 12.5979740519 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.32208582834 88% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 98.500998004 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 12.3882235529 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.1389221557 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.9071856287 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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