Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Everything in life is like a coin having two different sides, people should weigh the pros and cons before jumping to a solution. After all, each and everything in the question and topic requires a careful deliberation as in that there are always multiple variables to a truth. Although some people might disagree to this that the teachers were more appreciated by the society in the past. I strongly think that such opinion lacks the coherence to some extent. In my humble opinion, I think that teachers were more valued and appreciated in the past than today.
First and foremost, majority of people would agree to the notion that at present the students are less likely to respect their teachers as compared to the past. The present generation is more towards expressing and believing their own ideas compared to what their teachers say. To elaborate more to this, the students give less importance to their teachers efforts. Students now think that they would be able to gain more and better knowledge on the internet compared to what is taught to them by their teachers. To illustrate this by giving an example, I would like to express about my experience. When I was in my tenth grade we mostly learnt what our teachers taught us in the class and did rely on the notes and lectures given by the teachers. But now, when my younger brother in the same grade, they depend on the information given on the internet and believe that their teachers might be wrong. The efforts of their teachers are not valued as they are least interested in the classes and think that they might complete their work looking for in on the internet. Even though the internet can give them information but they cannot be as useful as explained by the teachers. All in all, we cannot and should not overlook the fact that even though we have the new technologies but the efforts made by our teachers should not be worthless and should make the most use of it.
On top of this, in the ancient times the teachers were worshiped as god. The people in the past thought that nobody could be more intelligent than their teachers. Whatever taught in the classes by the teachers and the effort they made was used to the fullest. The respect teachers got in the earlier times for the amount of their effort was not only appreciated by the students but also by the parents as they thought that nobody could teach better than their teachers. Students not only gain the academic information from their teachers but also the teachers teach us more valuable things like the basic manners. For instance, in India it is well written in the stories that the highly educated gods and goddesses gained the basic knowledge from their teachers and succeed in their life. They not only captured the information but also many other tasks from their teachers which now are well-studied by everybody in the books. Long story short, it is clear to me as a day that the teachers should be respected and the efforts they make their students to be successful should be respected in the society than wasting it.
In summation, Yes, it is virtually impossible to provide a completely satisfied answer to such an open-ended question. Although the jury may be out on this topic but, we can come to a mutual understanding that teachers in the past were more valued and hence, more respected compared to now.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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...e always multiple variables to a truth. Although some people might disagree to this that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, may, so, well, after all, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 52.1666666667 159% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2767.0 1977.66487455 140% => OK
No of words: 589.0 407.700716846 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69779286927 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92639038232 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46004386775 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.407470288625 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 836.1 618.680645161 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7272307298 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.68 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.56 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28 5.45110844103 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204447896643 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723565209711 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068243382484 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145913291603 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300739574182 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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