The society would benefit from ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful benefits and even demanding .Do you agree or disagree?

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The society would benefit from ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful benefits and even demanding .Do you agree or disagree?

It is true that these days advertising upsurge day by day.The root can that some people ponder that
it should ban more than good impacts of community .There are strong opinion dozen must not use the advertising product .There are manifold reasons .This essay throws some light an all aspect to the see in right perspective.

The seeds to the issue are multiheads.There most predominant todays technology plays a vital role in human being life.Hence,all generation using on the Internet.For instance,pupil, juvenile ,adolescent and primitive so on.However,
there are several use the app like cell phone ,computer ,laptop ,
tablets and television extra.Moreover,there have plethora advertised in this electronic gadgets than person can see all the advertising.

Nevertheless,I would take to some suggestion in this regard.As well as it is no doubt some time advertised has fake on the social website .For examples, fair creams,second hand materials like motorcycle,clothes extra.Thus most of time people liking the beauty in our life.they must using beauty products.Then citizen can use it .
they have unyielding effect in their life but also they has used fake products.

All said the done,I reckon on one hand my point of view I am fully agree with this statement.some person trust that advertising must ban on the society.on other hand I think that people should not easily trust whole the adverts such as it have very higher costs all the things.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, i reckon, i think, no doubt, such as, as well as, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31896551724 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20553843529 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672413793103 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.005299025 49.4020404114 237% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 246.8 106.682146367 231% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.4 20.7667163134 223% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 34.4 7.06120827912 487% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 44.0 5.01903807615 877% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135231258247 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694507008119 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0209877742501 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0542644112571 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265312690164 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.8 13.0946893788 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 24.79 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 9.78957915832 332% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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