You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter•say where you think you left the papers•explain why they are so im

Essay topics:

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
• say where you think you left the papers
• explain why they are so important
• tell the manager what you want him/her to do

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Rakesh Soni, one of your frequent customer of your hotel. I am writing to report that unwittingly I have left some important documents in your hotel.

Let me explain the situation in detail. Two days ago, I had come there to attend meeting with one of my client. The meeting was in the evening time from 4:00pm to 7:00pm it was conducted in conference room no 1101 on 11th Floor. Once I departed the hotel, I noticed that I left some important documents in conference room, perhaps on meeting table. In particular, these documents are extremely important as they are part of contract agreement for our new project. As they are original documents I can’t afford to lose them. If these documents are not produced by next week to my office, I would be in great trouble.

I would request you to ask your staff to conduct thorough search in conference room and then hold these documents in your possession. Please give me call on +971565445213 once you have it so that I will come immediately to collect it.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
Rakesh Soni

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, in particular

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71428571429 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6566694459 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612244897959 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5966927571 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0769230769 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0769230769 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232269124885 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765017053623 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600822731705 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152488562481 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330908774841 0.0580467560999 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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