Recently, Monarch Books, a bookstore recognized for its large selection, has been considering the implementation of a café in the store to increase sponsorship and, subsequently, sales. While the change in the business model is important as time progresses and the needs of consumers change, Monarch should consider: the possible future ramifications of this movement in an already populated customer base, a demographic study and an analysis How appropriate is this movement in relation to the individual success of the Monarch Books?
First, Although Monarch Books has a large customer base at this time because of its eclectic variety of books, a change in the business model can have unexpected ramifications if not adequately considered in a balanced manner. Having a previously established customer base is no guarantee of future success. This is evident in the very nature of changing business tactics, since successful companies aim to continue their success by evaluating changes in populations over time. This is why studies and surveys are often taken. Qualifying consumer satisfaction over time helps to correlate changes with actual success or failure to help explain what may be fruitful in the future.
Second, In addition, although the space may possibly be cleared by suspending the children's section of the bookstore, a question arises about the ownership of Monarch's customer base: how many of Monarch's customers are parents who flock to the bookstore in part or simply because of your children? While the population of children may be declining nationally, this would be odd information if most Monarch Books customers are parents who want to build their children early with printed books or who support their children. who have asked to be present in the store. Not all people in the children's section are necessarily children.
Finally, opening a café in response to the success of Regal Books with this business model is largely myopic. There is no way in the light of the argument presented to assess whether or not there is a significant similarity between the sponsorship in Regal Books and Monarch Books. Regal Books can attract a different demographic from customers, and subsequently its success may not reflect the success of the cafeteria itself for Monarch. Monarch Books could develop a better understanding of whether the need for a coffee is present by analyzing the needs and desires of its own demographics. Nor is it known at this time if the Regal Books coffee will succeed.
In conjure, building a new café in Monarch Books may not be really beneficial for business. Monarch Books should consider possible changes, good or bad, for the population of its customer base established in the construction of a coffee. It is possible that some of the users of Monarch Books are more inclined to be in the store due to the current section for children, so the relinquishment of the children's section can do more harm than good for the business. In addition, building a business model from the success of a competing business may not result in a success for Monarch if the demographics of Monarch and Regal Books are different. Monarch Books would be better suited to gather more information about its own customer base already present before attempting to expand the customer base with this move.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: MIGHT_PERHAPS[1]
Message: Use simply 'may', 'possibly'.
Suggestion: may; possibly
...Second, In addition, although the space may possibly be cleared by suspending the childrens ...
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Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'may'.
Suggestion: may
...Second, In addition, although the space may possibly be cleared by suspending the childrens ...
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Line 5, column 523, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Who
...ed books or who support their children. who have asked to be present in the store. ...
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Line 5, column 523, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “who” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ed books or who support their children. who have asked to be present in the store. ...
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Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...ght of the argument presented to assess whether or not there is a significant similarity betwe...
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Line 9, column 259, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...uction of a coffee. It is possible that some of the users of Monarch Books are more incline...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, may, really, second, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2800.0 2235.4752809 125% => OK
No of words: 545.0 442.535393258 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1376146789 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83169070408 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88132641602 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.442201834862 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 871.2 704.065955056 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.4139270401 60.3974514979 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.333333333 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9523809524 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362046880913 0.243740707755 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12504954301 0.0831039109588 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788024030016 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223754011128 0.150359130593 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786105270874 0.0667264976115 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.