Someone said that marriage is big responsibility. Family members and friends always argue that marriage before school and job is not good choice. Actually I agree with them because, firstly we you are marring you must be capable of taking all responsibility of other person financially and mentally. In order to do this u must finish graduation to get a good job. Its not good that your parents are taking your care of your expenses and instead of helping them you just increase their responsibility. By the time we get graduate degree parents are at the age of their retirement. If we ignore this parents may face lots of difficulty. So its always good take our responsibility.
When we are getting married we need to be mentally strong also because after that we are supposed to take care of whole family and ourselves. While being together as couple we must support each other. Together both husband and wife build their goals including trips, illness, new home, kids, their education and many other small things. If we try to these all things before finishing school and getting job. We will not able to focus on both things at a time. Human mind is designed as such that we can concentrate on one matter at a time otherwise there are possibilities of failing in all. For getting job and to finish school we are supposed to dedicate all our time for study only. Many schools have tough schedule. While following schedule we might ignore many important moments of our life.
I am girl. My marriage was fixed when I was only 21 yrs old and he was 22 yrs old. We both were studding at that time. We postponed our marriage and focused on studies and well paid job so that we can live happily together. In this time we could hardly find time for each other and family. After 5 yrs today we both have job, a good home and enough bank balance so that we can spend our life without any tensions. In this years we faced many difficulties while doing this all if we were married it would have been really difficult to do all. Now we are getting married this month. Now we both are ready to take all responsibilities together and we are ready financially as well as mentally. From my experience i totally agree that we must finish our studies and get job before marriage.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nts are at the age of their retirement. If we ignore this parents may face lots of...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ake care of whole family and ourselves. While being together as couple we must suppor...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...only. Many schools have tough schedule. While following schedule we might ignore many...
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Line 6, column 322, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
... family. After 5 yrs today we both have job, a good home and enough bank balance so...
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Line 6, column 418, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...spend our life without any tensions. In this years we faced many difficulties while ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, may, really, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56234718826 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5270199507 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501222493888 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3145239235 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.1111111111 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1481481481 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81481481481 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21464419435 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752731258483 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992755254128 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172695296753 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632377661105 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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