Because of the global economy, many goods including what we use daily produced by other countries have to be transported for a long distance. To what extent do the advantage outweigh the disadvantage?

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Because of the global economy, many goods including what we use daily produced by other countries have to be transported for a long distance. To what extent do the advantage outweigh the disadvantage?

The importance of the global economy which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact on recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one steams from the fact that many countries are doing transport help the ships. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that it is the good production for the all countries relations. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.

Elaborate my viewpoint, there are some more merits but one of the crucial effect is that we can taste verity of fruits and vegetables. Moreover, establishment of different branded shewsems like adidas and nike. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of this trend.

According to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of global economy are indeed too great to ignore.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, while, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 206.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09223300971 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69912079889 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606796116505 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7156657349 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3636363636 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110129603484 0.242375264174 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403642830896 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318231431169 0.071462118173 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624007470212 0.151781067708 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400956673134 0.0609392437508 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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